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©2009 *Jenipho
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I like this one, especially because of the fact there's no cropping, hardly any editing apart from a blue filter and curves, and the focus is exactly how I wanted it! :love:

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Poison I
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Critiques


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This is wonderful. I love the way you used negative space, and the very shallow depth of field makes the left half of the picture very mysterious.

I like the simplicity of the colors, how the lip color matches the plants (at least, I think those are plants), and how the eye color seems just like a muted version of the lip color or a brighter version of the background color.

Part of me wishes we could see more of the eye, but another part of me likes that it's cropped because it makes the image more original, though this is quite original to begin with.
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:iconjules1983:
This is quite an interesting portrait. First of all the colors seem both cool and warm, but they create a great contrast and go very well together. Also,
I'm very fond of the way this picture is split up in two halves. The blades (or whatever they are) forming a curve and the eye looking to the side, make it easy for the viewer to let their eyes wander over the entire picture instead of focusing on just one point.
I'm only slightly distracted by a few pink-ish spots on the left side of the picture - probably something that was in the background.

Other than that, this is awesome, great lighting, great focus, great colors and a beautiful model!
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:iconholladewaldfee:
great idea and composition.
the light is just perfect :)
also it's a bit sad, that the eye is a bit cut-off, you know?

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Niveau ist keine Creme
:iconjenipho:
Thanks! It's meant to be cut off, thats what I wanted haha :P :D

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caught in a web of lies.
:iconholladewaldfee:
you're very welcome^^
ah :) ok, i'm just eye-centric ;D and as you've got really beautiful eyes i was kinda sad ;D but if it's supposed to be like that I'm taking back my critique ^^

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Niveau ist keine Creme
:iconjewlogic:
i love it!! i love how not all of your face is showing. :D :D

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But its a good thing for me because I'm Jewish.
Which means I'm closer to the pennies.
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-- Gil Grissom
:iconjenipho:
Haha I usually like eyes to be the centre of attention, but I wanted a different composition for some reason :D :D :hug:

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caught in a web of lies.
:iconjenipho:
Thank you! <3

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caught in a web of lies.
:iconholladewaldfee:
it's a cool idea actually :)
really different, i like that :glomp:

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Niveau ist keine Creme
:iconfais-moi-la-moue:
This is my favorite of the serie :aww:
Just Wonderful :heart:

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Moving ahead, falling back, with memories and dreams to come.
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oh my god. this is AMAZING.

oh my god.

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keep your head above this water.

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May 1, 2009, 4:09:37 PM

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